Hey,
Listening ... For sure, dont change those strings, they are very cool, kinda like a soundtrack movie, very sweet indeed , the piano is a cool touch but I would make it more spacy and one octave down, because u need to put a bit of contrast, look, u are using strings in a high range, and if u add piano in the same range than strings the piano will feel kinda away, but iuf u use it an octave lower will make stronger ur strings .
Kick appears, I listen also some vanguard GAT :P, nice Drums, pitty the quality is 96, nice build up, I like go this is going, it lacks of some litle things, like a stronger melody or sort of .
In overall, really nice tune mate, u add a vocal to this and u have a really cool track, just work a bit more with some more melodies and adding the piano again after the intro, because this track is asking for an awesome melody to be added .
Kopi =o.

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the start is amazing , your waiting for a melody to come bursting out but then it goes into some sort of beat , imo you should get a PHAT melody in there after pads and piano , fade it out and bring in the beat , but so much of this reminds me of adaigo for strings , just the way its made etc

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