I'm listening...

First of all, that kick could be a little tighter. I DO like the weird bass in it, and I also like the way this track starts. But I want to hear more SFX in the beginning, though. Could be also a little more interesting in the beginning, perhaps synth arpeggios or small hints of melody. I sort of like how the synth melody around 3 minutes slowly progresses, but it just needs more things to draw attention.

-weBs

Hey Webs

good points...but im not the type to make the typical trance tracks.
I like adding different sub-genre elements like tech/house/dnb in my tracks.

I like to bring a more dark and hard feeling as well...

So ya im glad u like it...i think...

Although i did find at times there could be more things goin on...still i appreciate the suggestions

hope to have u review my next track

take it eas

Seb

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Last edited by djdustx on Apr-02-2005 at 19:12

I like your bassline, it's pretty nice. I'd like to hear some better EQ, and sometimes your hihats are hitting at the same time, causing some clipping. I like the melody around 4:20, but your synths seem kind of muddy. Again, it's a pretty decent techno track with some nice trancey elements, but see what you can do about the EQ. Keep up the good work,

Tilda

Hey tilda

thnx for takin the time out to listen

ya i had some probs with the eq'ing...thinkin i'll pull a pvd and pay some sound tech guy to fix it all up...Glad u like the melody .

Muddy?...ya im a huge prodigy fan...and i like to use a grimmey feel at times

regarding the hihats...i like to have an overdrive attack with my percs...to give it a kind of more intense / rugged feeling.

im tryin to take trance to a new lvl...or at least see what i manage to spit out combining different sub-genre elements.

again thnx web + e for the replies...always glad to have some input

Seb.

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