Hello, made my first trance track recently with a mate, just wondering if you guys could coment on it. I like constructive critism so give me it!

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2233932&q=Hi

Cheers guys,

Duff

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Duff

ah man that links the wrong page.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/ahpmusicukmusic.htm

its Nalaffud - System overload.

Cheers

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Duff

Link brought to me a hip hop page after a million pop ups. Is this the right link?

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ah im sorry about that man, i fucking hate popups. There is some hiphop but i have a trance tune on there aswell. if you scroll down the page you will see "NALAFFUD - SYSTEM OVERLOAD" thats my track, you can stream it from that site jsut hit "play - Hi-hi"

Duff

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Duff

listening....


nice intro

i think that first crash symbol should have more reverb and a long slow release.

the leads are a bit generic and overused for my personal taste. I think a more catchy hookline would make this song alot better.

nice use of filters etc.

after the buildup when it kicks back in, it kinda loses some punch. I dunno it might just be me.

Overall nice variation in sound, besides leads. But overall i like this track its nicely produced and has some interesting sounds. Seriously a first trance effort? Impressive, you have alot of the elements down already. What experience have you before this track?

Keep up the good work !

hey man cheers for the reply. I study music at acacdemy of contempory music!

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Duff