Hey,
Listening .... Hehehe very happy intro,yay! lol ... is cool .The kinda breakdown at 1:00 was very sweet, is a shame you just used it like 15 seconds, you had there a lot to use . I am liking the mood of this track, is kinda sad/happy .
In overall, I liked a lot your track dude, just lacks of somethings like strings and I would make it extended, right now sounds great but kinda like you dont have enought time into that 5 minutes to let each part present itself well, but that's just my opinion the track is great good work man , I give it a 8.0 in my Kopimeter :P.
Kopi =o.

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Weird track...I don't know what to say about it.

It sounds too thin for my tastes - very "gamey" with not too much atmosphere.

I'd recommend some ambient pads, maybe another level of faint drums or something and slow it down - great melodies but pumpin at 140bpm

6/10, good ideas but follow this one up with an update please - pads!

And maybe a less standard drumline.

Good luck,

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