Hey man. I'll listen in a bit, but I'd recomend getting an account with SiteSled or with SoundClick, that way, your posts will last longer than a week . Ok, listenign now.

-I hear what you are saying about bellydancing-like :P.
-The synth-trumpet sound is kinda jumbled around, its got a decent potential to be good melody if it was cleaned up and a different instrument was used.
-Your kick needs more of a click. One of the key things to getting that perfect soundign kick is some good EQing. Lay a parametric EQ over the sample and make sure u bump up the 3000Hz and 5000Hz levels as well as the 500Hz *or* 250Hz *or* 63Hz ranges. Those 'or's are important because they will determine the overall sound of the kick, the timbre if you will.
-The 'woh, woh, woh' sound gets old after a while. Flange it or somethign to make it change :P.

Overall, it seems to just be a goof-around track but I can hear some potential in there too for a decent trance song as long as you set your midn for trance instead of ska .

Cheers,
Zac

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