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groundzero74
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Antwerp
Exclamation [Energy Trance] Bienstman_J._-_Lightness (Full Version)

Hello,

This is the first track i'm putting up here on TA , it's a full version but there is lots of room for improvement.

I could use some constructive feedback on the : sounds & quality , melody , arrangement etc...


Track info:
Title : "Lightness"
Genre : Trance
Duration : 6:14
Bitrate : 112kbps (high quality encoded) / 5mb



Link:
Bienstman_J._-_Lightness.mp3

Thank you for listening

Old Post May-07-2005 19:13  Belgium
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TheWiseman
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rotterdam

Hi there,

nice track!

percussion is good, a lot of nice effects also! keeps it very alive

melody and synths could use some power and phatness

keep up the good work!

grtz,

TheWiseman


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groundzero74
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Antwerp

thx for the review !

quote:
melody and synths could use some power and phatness


Yeah actually i was holding back the volume a little on the Synths and Main riff , fearing it would make the whole thing too busy ... but i'm going to get to it ...

anything on the bassline ? too loud in the mix ?


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Darkone55
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Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Netherlands

Beginning sounds quite ok, the idea of that panning is nice, but i think it's a bit too much... You don't need to pan that, just make it sound wide.

Then, it's very nice! Untill the bass comes in. I don't like it, it's a too standart trance-bass, and it's too loud imo.

At about 45 secs or something the kick lost too much of it's energy, I think because of the bass. Hmm, that tune is ok, but (also for the synth) it a bit standart.

The climax is not that smashing.. Not special either. I'm sorry, I expected it would be a great track, but when the bass comes in, it's noting special anymore.
The leads could be a lot louder, and the bass a lot less louder.
Percussion is quite ok, but not very energic.

The rest is well produced.


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groundzero74
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Location: Antwerp

Thanks for the feedback,

quote:
I expected it would be a great track, but when the bass comes in, it's noting special anymore.


ok, you mean right after the buildup during break right ? could you pin-poin the time in the song ? thx

About the bassline . . .i though so already ... too loud.

Will try and fix it ...


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Darkone55
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Location: Netherlands

quote:
Originally posted by groundzero74
Thanks for the feedback,



ok, you mean right after the buildup during break right ? could you pin-poin the time in the song ? thx

About the bassline . . .i though so already ... too loud.

Will try and fix it ...


Well, the percussion is good, the kick is good, it looks soo promesing! But unfortunately it went a different way, and it's starting to look like a standart-nothing-special-trance-track when the bass comes in. That about eh.. 20 secs or so I thought.

Good luck, I like Belgian artists like MIKE and Soulwax. :P


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Romi
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Very nice track, a lot of energy in it. Nice break, a bit sudden how it gets to the climax then, work on the build-up some more, but the melody of the climax is very cool and again has a lot of energy. I think if you improve the break a bit it should be a great trancer. -Ron

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groundzero74
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M.I.K.E ... of course he's the man! ... i'll take your advice and try to cook up a new bassline, and ill get that climax more uplifting ... thanks...


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groundzero74
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quote:
Nice break, a bit sudden how it gets to the climax then, work on the build-up some more,


Yeah, you're right .. i just didn't notice when creating the track... too close hey... i'll extend it and creat a more flowing transition...

Thanks for the advice dude ...


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