Awesome. I'm completely stunned by this. This is 11 out of 10 to me.

From the awesome mystic, atmospheric beginning with great percussion, to a driving, hypnotizing parts to the wonderful dark and epic climax... this is a great piece of art.

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Originally posted by PDM 'Der Mystik'.

-First thing i liked was the bass drum. good choice.
-excellent pads. The male chior are awesome.
3.27 the break comes too suddenly. It didnt seem right.
-Great Break with dramatic pads. I like this.
4.16 jerky frequency changes.
4.52 brilliant. great layering. the pads/bass/bass drum come together well. the the hihats are a little muffled; thought there is alot going on.
5.30 poly synth layer seems out of place. (the one that first emerges at the 2.05 mark) With such an dark epic tune I am unsure why you choose this sound. It's OK though.

I really enjoyed this tune. Awesome production.

Xeno.

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Glad you liked it Cyber!

Xeno, the sound at 2:05 and then later is the supportive main meoldy, I thing it adds some unique that not many Epic tracks have, I just put it earlier to tease the listener.

I'm also making a Cut version of this with some different elements.

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Last edited by PDM on Jun-03-2005 at 04:09

the intro sorta messed with my eyes, that robotic monotone sounds like the speech synthesizer on FL lolz

other than, the song gets really nice, even for dark trance :P

i like the use of percussion and bass.
the melody is also very good.

Oo this string is very good, but it came in too fast to me, aswell as the other melody just suddenly cut off.

4:48, i loved that fresh bass coming in, sounded really good.
the start of synth is good, but losses some energy as it goes on.

i dont know much about the dark trance style.
but this is a pretty good song.

keep up the good work man.

your kick sounds rather basic tho, i think a more bad ass kick suits dark trance more... maybe..., either that or im just running my keyboard :P

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wooo!! you can just hear the talent
superb percs and bbeat in the beginning..
maybe you can make the smooth synth around 2:31 a little raspier it gives a eral good dark atmosphere!
3:53 YESS HERE IT IS i waited for that I knew it was going to come
how did you make that.. pad ??
4:48 kicks in a bit unsuspected.. don't know.. I personally think that shouldn't be done here..
love that bassline!
Good guided synth @ 5:43 sweet fx's too
at 8:20 it gets really "dark" you should do more with that
(9:25 solo sounds really nice!)

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Yes, dark and an excellent composition from the sounds of things. However, Im not sure if its just me, is that distortion effect could be toned down

Thanks AniG, taking note for my remix of this same track, usually I like to leave the original as it is, because I like it that way, then I make a remix to suit the suggestions been made.

I'll give you a smoother transition in my remix.

Takkra, thanks thanks thanks for such a passionate review, it really makes my day when I know someone is enjoying my songs, that is the best pay off for a musicia.

Viba, I know what effect you are talking about, the problem is if I tone it down, then the rest of the frequencies (since there is a lot going on) that are somehow similar to the freq. of the effect would make it non-audible (if that word even exists )

Thanks for pointing that out.

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Woah. Voice synth in intro is awesome and crazy.

Dude, this break sounds like some kinda evil Bach chorale. Good job with that.

The half-time break beats were really cool. I liked your choral pads.

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