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- seems like too much reveerb on that lead at around 1:30
- some background strings sound almost dissonant with the melodies, maybe they just need to be more prominent to hear the full sound.
- cool breakbeat part ~ 4:25
- i like the melody that comes afterward
- overall, melodies are pretty good, but i'd use different synths
- throughout the track, the hats and percs seem to be driven down by the melodic elements, and it kind of takes away from the drive. same goes for the bass i think.
- after several listens, this track is growing on me melodically, but all those things i mentioned still need work IMO.
- also, strings should complement the meldoy, add atmosphere so to speak, and to this end they must comply with the melodies as far as key goes and strings here don't seem to do that. maybe its just me...
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