can someone please give me a reply so i can go on with this thing
thnx
Apr-18-2005 10:55
Stino
= Vast Vision
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Bergen op Zoom
i think you havfe some nice dark sounds but you need to work on your structure, bass and percussion
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Apr-18-2005 11:03
PDM
Legacy
Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fresno, CA
Your Kick Drums sound like they need some medical attention, they are not alive, you might need to add some more gain to it.
Hi Hats are low in volume, especially that one kicking in at the minute 1:17. The Hi Hat of the minute 0:49 is really cool, keep that one.
Nice dark elements like Vast Vision stated, work in the structure, create a nice build up and then rock the house with the climax, this track has potential, do not waste it.
thnx already for the reply's guys i am happy with, it this keeps me goinng on i really want to make a real nice song, and your all helping me a lot thnx for that i see what i can do with all this advise
Apr-19-2005 14:25
Romi
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Not that great now, but i see that you're still working on it. I like the dark melody and synths, maybe try to improve the melo a bit, it's a bit simple now. Some subtle changes imo. Listen to some great trancers for a better construction. It's better to start slowly than to begin with synths right from the beginning (it's nicer for the dj also ). Also i miss a break now. Well, work on it some more, and definatly check out your structure.
