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First off, I hope this is just a demo because if it isnt, theres no intro :P.
-Good ctachy rythms but where is the bass? I hear the bassline and the kick but theres not nearly enough bass in the 250Hz and 500Hz range. To be the floor thumper it could be, you need a heavier kick, somethign that doens tsound so much like a plain, un-modified floor tom  .
-I like the phaser you have going on. Adds a bit of quality to the track.
-Good break away but nothing happens/changes? A break is meant to be there so the listeners are on edge, waiting for what they will hear next.
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-Seems like its full on from the start and nothing changes. Try goign with a more progressive style where you start with just some drums maybe a really muted or wet-only reverb on the counter-melody.
-Which brings up another point, where is the melody?? This track is pretty good base work for possibly a damn good track.
-Add in some strained strings work. Strings can make or break a song though so watch what you use. For this track in particular, I'd highly recomend FM synthesized strings. It will definantly add a lot to the track.
-The track is a bit too short (again, hoping its jsut a demo? :P). Add in a long break. This track deserves it. With the synth work and kick work you have going on, I could definantly hear a piano going on in the background, something BT - Flaming June style.
Overall, good start. I look forword to seeing how you change it and add in stuff.
Grade B (needs improvement but quite good start)
Cheers,
Zac
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