this kind of style is not really what i listen to, but that part at around 1:30 is pretty fun heh, tho way too cheesy. i don't really have much to add. if i were to go along this type of sound i'd make the synths fuller and maybe throw a saw pad in the back.

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Thank you very much for spending your time on writing something about my song ;-) (Sorry, my english isn't the best...)