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You've got some nice ideas in there but they're a bit basic and don't really seem to do a lot
You should really look at the levels of your percussion, the open hat is too loud and everything else seems too quiet, particularly the snare. You could also do with more going on there both perc and synth-wise. The bassline doesn't really drive the bottom end of the track as it should, shorter notes and more of them would probably help.
The sounds of the synths themselves are also a bit simple and sound weak, the sound you've used for your lead would probably work quite well as a background synth though. Try different synths, different patches and vary things like filters over the top of them.
Have a listen to some other tracks and see how they are layered with percussion etc, filled out with sweep sounds and make use of variations in volume, effects etc
Hope this helps, keep working at it, good luck 
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