Okey dokey...
Ive remixed the above track with kind permission from Adreneline,
I'd love to know what you all think, didnt get much feedback on my last project so hopefully you guys can give me some constructive criticism this time - how else am I going to improve???

Thanks for your time..

MP

Adreneline ft Lauren Bentle - Oceans of mixed Emotions (TMP mix)

nice vocals but you use them too much.
you should fatten up the pads more.
the acids are cool.
lead is nice.
is it just me or you raised the temp again at 3:34?? Not good...
It's nice but there isn't much veriation.

3/5

can u give me the vocalist's mail or something?
can she sing?

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The Darkone - You Come With Power
The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

Thanks for the comments,I WILL take all comments on board - after all its you guys that know best!
In response - Ill take out some of the vocals, I did think I used them a lot, but didnt want the track to sound empty without them - will fill it out with some more pads,leads etc.

In regards to the tempo - It starts at 140Bpm, then at 2:04 i slow it down to 120Bpm with the breakbeat, then bring it back up to 130Bpm.

It was just something I wanted to experiment with - obviously not everyones cup of tea!!

Thanks for 3/5 !!


MP

PS - Dont know the vocalist - got a remix pack for the track (see title)

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Originally posted by MessiahProject Thanks for the comments,I WILL take all comments on board - after all its you guys that know best! In response - Ill take out some of the vocals, I did think I used them a lot, but didnt want the track to sound empty without them - will fill it out with some more pads,leads etc. In regards to the tempo - It starts at 140Bpm, then at 2:04 i slow it down to 120Bpm with the breakbeat, then bring it back up to 130Bpm. It was just something I wanted to experiment with - obviously not everyones cup of tea!! Thanks for 3/5 !! MP PS - Dont know the vocalist - got a remix pack for the track (see title)

you don't change the tempo!
thats not proffesional thing to do.
ever seen a Push track that did that?
Or an airbase track?

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The Darkone - You Come With Power
The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

I also have this remix pack.

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

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Originally posted by The Drow you don't change the tempo! thats not proffesional thing to do. ever seen a Push track that did that? Or an airbase track?

Since when has professional meant not changing tempo?
It sounds professional enough on 'Young Parisians - You write the rules'
I dont wish to be Push or Airbase. Isnt music all about originality?
I wanted to try something different, I can understand you have your opinions and obviously you dont like it, but dont use the word 'professional' when slagging off my track. I create stuff, and I try to add something original to it.

by the way - This is what 'professional' means -

1-A person following a profession, especially a learned profession.
2-One who earns a living in a given or implied occupation: hired a professional to decorate the house.
3-A skilled practitioner; an expert.
(cant see 'tempo changing' anywhere in there??)

MP

Any more constructive comments?

Adrenaline's cool he's on the CD I bought from Internet DJ, and he's on my msn.

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Originally posted by MessiahProject Since when has professional meant not changing tempo? It sounds professional enough on 'Young Parisians - You write the rules' I dont wish to be Push or Airbase. Isnt music all about originality? I wanted to try something different, I can understand you have your opinions and obviously you dont like it, but dont use the word 'professional' when slagging off my track. I create stuff, and I try to add something original to it. by the way - This is what 'professional' means - 1-A person following a profession, especially a learned profession. 2-One who earns a living in a given or implied occupation: hired a professional to decorate the house. 3-A skilled practitioner; an expert. (cant see 'tempo changing' anywhere in there??) MP Any more constructive comments?

'Young Parisians - You write the rules' didn't do that.
I never heard a track that does that, imo it just ruins the song

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The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

I don't mind the tempo changing, if it sounds good keep it, there are no rules to muis producing really, if it sounds good and it's diferent then thats good. Although it's a bit too simple for me, not much variation , a little too repetitive.

The solarstone remix does - its on 'Infinite Euphoria' by Ferry Corsten,
Anyway - just because YOU have never heard it doesnt mean it doesnt happen!

I still stand by my original argument about originality.
Anyway - this is what Adrenaline said about my remix of his track -

"Hey mate that is awesome! I like what you've done with it.
As soon as i get all the remixes from all the artists that ive sent the
remix pack to, i am sending off a CD to Central Station Records, which
will give some of you the opportunity to have this track pressed and
released."


MP

Adrenaline asked me to remix it too, so I'll give it ago.

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Originally posted by MessiahProject The solarstone remix does - its on 'Infinite Euphoria' by Ferry Corsten, Anyway - just because YOU have never heard it doesnt mean it doesnt happen! I still stand by my original argument about originality. Anyway - this is what Adrenaline said about my remix of his track - "Hey mate that is awesome! I like what you've done with it. As soon as i get all the remixes from all the artists that ive sent the remix pack to, i am sending off a CD to Central Station Records, which will give some of you the opportunity to have this track pressed and released." MP

maybe ferry corsten changed the tempo?
I have the track right here.

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The Darkone - You Come With Power
The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*