Here is a short sample of my version of RickyM and his big melody.

It around 0.000005% complete and just want some opinions of how to take this track off

http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36VR82MV9PF803TUP00GJ92UAM

- just to see the end result, try to un-structure the melodies a little bit. sort of like what happens in "solstice" by james holden.
- i'd change that secondary melody that comes later on, or maybe put it an octave lower
- add a strong 4x4 hat to set the drive
- maybe also work on the bassline as it sounds a bit weak and even too common

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