Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
Check Out Ma Track!!
What up guys....have this in the Music production forum, but i thought id get some feedback from all you guys to.
Heres a dark pounding progger....its only 3:18 and i'm not done yet.
But...gimmi some feedback, good or bad.
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: richmond hill, ontario, canada
good one for a halloween party
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May-07-2005 00:46
TheNeonAlien
Techno Sensei
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Toronto
quote:
Originally posted by smuncky
good one for a halloween party
Cause its EVIL???
its pretty good!
maybe that first build should be a little longer??
what did u use to make this?
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May-07-2005 01:36
djbruuen
house
Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Milton
its a cool song...my only complaint would be "way to overcompressed in the bass frequency!!!) i know every producer wants to blow the listener away to nevernever land with a pumping bass, but it has to be proportioned properly to the rest of the song, on a club since the bass would start distorting before any other element is even heard. what type of monitors are you mixing with?
just touch up the bass
i like the effects, you have some nite breaks...this song could thrive of powerful buildups too...take some time to master those...add to the intensity.
Last edited by djbruuen on May-07-2005 at 02:10
May-07-2005 01:50
DJ_Elyot
Havarti > Gouda
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Kitchener, Ontario, Canada
What an awesome beat. Very nice sounds you've got here. I love it.
Maybe you can do something with those build-ups. That'll come later once you get the rest of the track put together I suppose. Very nice.
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May-07-2005 04:54
zookeeper
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Rochester, New York - on the shore of Lake Ontario
Waaaaayyy toooo much bass, drop 500hz, 64hz and lower out on your EQ. and it may clean up some of the muddy sounds.
Good start though, it has a hook.
May-07-2005 05:27
++ EGO ++
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Toronto, ON
I didn't have my bass on,
but good start!
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May-07-2005 05:31
Mr Rogers
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
thanx guys...ya, i haven't thrown in the "big break yet"...not sure how i wanna do it.
And play'n around the frequencies and shit, mastering and compression. Lotta that is over my head, still learning about that.
But its all put together with Reason 3.0 .
Thanx for the comments though guys, i'll try and do something with that bass.....
for monitors im just work'n with a pair a 4 8" quests...so not the best in the bus.
I need to work on a track with someone whos great at eq'n and mastering kuz that i am not
^ well thats usually the most common problem among new producers is the mastering/compressioning/eqing, problem...i'm getting better at it, but still have a lot of learning to do.
right now i just have some cheap hifi's...i've been doing my research though and have saved up some money, and in the next two weeks i'm buying the Event Tr-6's from steve's music in TO. (b4 tax they're $550 for the pair) i'm just waiting now for them to get them in stock. after my listening sessions, for the price i don't think you can get a better monitor (although that isn't set in stone since i haven't heard everything, but they blow away the krk's, truths, samson, etc.)
May-07-2005 14:31
Mr Rogers
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
ya, a buddy of mine worked at future shop so i picked up the quests for about $160 with tax...but i hear ya, it would be nice to get more clarity in my monitors for sure.
Ive been producing for a while now, ive been learning bout mastering/eq'n lately to better the mix...but ive heard its a black art..not something you can really just read about.
So, over time I can only get better...thanx for the info though
Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Scarborough, Ontario
really impressive...I actually really like the track....this is my second listen, I would really like to hear some of your other work....keep up the great work!