What did you do with the file? it sounds very strange... very distorted and noisy and somehow chopped at times. It's very hard to judge a track from such a poor quality, but I'll try to write down some things coming to my mind.
Anyway, I still like the ambience in parts, I like the deep synths starting at 3:15 for example. A pad starting at 1:20 is really disturbing and loud. The percs sound basically ok.
No offense, but I suggest you should give us a more listenable file, this one sounds like you put everything through a bitcrusher.

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Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

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