don't like that oompah-oompah bass...make a more creative bassline than that.
shit that sound @ 1:24 killed my ears!
the melody is good, kinda like it actually.
percussions are very minimal, imo you need to add more.
btw why the 64kbps quality? and a 1:50min "sample"..? are you keeping a treasure or smth?

anyway it's nice.

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I like the melody man, but if I were you I'd change some other things. Firstly I'd say you need a stronger kick (harder one) and also the bass and percs sounds a bit simple. But the track has potential!

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ok!

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Green Sky

Azerbaijan, Baku.