These effects are really fun.

I like that lead. Good and dark.

I think it would do well with a bassline of some kind. Nothing too intrusive really. More just something to give it a bit more tonality.

Nice dark track, quite stomping.
Nice FX, they could be more present. How about a slight volume increase of the intro percs?
1:30 - really nice contradiction, track is "booming" now, the bass is massive.
Well like you said, the volume could be adjusted a bit, but in general this track worked really well for me. Keep it up

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thanx guys.....in the other forum, people are say'n the bass is too compressed and muddy...what does this mean???
How did it get "compressed " in the first place...
I still gotta lot to learn with putting down a good mix/master.
Any comments??

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Well if you didnt use compression on it yourself, then it probably means it sounds distorted. You can make it sound clearer by using less compression, boosting the higher frequencies of the bass, and using a very short attack and decay time on the waveform.

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sounds good...i'll try that out.
thanx

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ok that cut off quite abruptly

I think your kick is too loud, probably cause of your "mud" problem

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Originally posted by Pjotr G ok that cut off quite abruptly

as i stated its not done
just wanted feedback thats all... and to fix the "muddy" whats my best bet to go about that?

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nice one, it's really bangin and dark

the main loop sounds a bit too "centered" for my taste, how about a subtle spreading of some of the percussions or effects, a bit to the left or right.

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i wanted to check this out...any chance you can put it up again?

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Last edited by Mr Rogers on May-14-2005 at 17:13