It's been a while since I posted something over here, but this is the result of several hours of work. I hope you like it, and I hope you can give some constructive feedback. It's progressive house/trance, but it's more like prog house I think. You may judge.
- Nice begin
- Cool percussion
- Like the depth of the key
- Volume of bass is a little hard (can be my monitors)
- Really like the atmosphere your creating here
- The small break by 1:56 is a little bit unexpected.
- The track reminds me of clear blue (atmophere).
- Like the string by 2:56, nice chords
@ 3:55, end of the break, kick and percs are joining, nice
- Second break is a little long and don't add much to the first in my opinion
I don't have many critics. Can we hear a snippet in 192?
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DownForce
May-20-2005 17:03
Loock
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: UE
AWESOME !!!! track !! realy ... i like it !!
nice kick and percussion !
Greetz !
Luke
May-20-2005 17:47
Teknikol
terug uut 'de west'!
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Flakkee
quote:
Originally posted by DjMorpheus
- Nice begin
- Cool percussion
- Like the depth of the key
- Volume of bass is a little hard (can be my monitors)
- Really like the atmosphere your creating here
- The small break by 1:56 is a little bit unexpected.
- The track reminds me of clear blue (atmophere).
- Like the string by 2:56, nice chords
@ 3:55, end of the break, kick and percs are joining, nice
- Second break is a little long and don't add much to the first in my opinion
I don't have many critics. Can we hear a snippet in 192?
thanks for the - great - feedback! I'll work on your points and post a snippet when I get home. (I'm at my girlfriend's right now)
Loock thank you for your positive feedback too!
greetz
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May-20-2005 20:56
Kenidel Lopez
tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: PA
Very nice deep/progressive track.
Your EQ/Mastering is top notch from what I hear (and this is a 96kps mp3 ???).
I like the atmosphere of it.
A note change/bass lead would go nice with that melody that comes in at around 6:30 , although then the track wouldnt be minimal/deep progressive i guess.
The build up is long and good, a serious (so-called "dark") build up and a catchy bassline to go with the Melody that comes in a 6:30 is my main suggestion.
, although then the track wouldnt be minimal/deep progressive i guess.
