Hey. Isnt working for me. Either SoundClick is having some of the usual afternoon issues or your upload wasnt successful. Gives me the error, 'error syncing to mpeg'.

Cheers,
Zac

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---FL Studio 9 User---

prob just soundclick being its usual dodgy self

i think its working now

Hey. [working now]

-Good kick. Its a little rich in the upper frequencies but not too bad.
-I liek the dark pad. Gives a definant mood to the song from the start .
-The trance gate coming in and out in the intro is an awesome additive. Perfect use of reverb on it.
-Good bassline, thick and heavy but not overly muddy. though a little quiet in comparison to your kick. They should be, audibly, equal volumes as a good rule of thumb.
-Good melody that comes in. Little muddy though, but for some reason, in a bit of a good way.
-The kick is definantly too loud .

Overall, good song. It needs some tuning though . The track is, as a whole, a bit too muddy, especially with the melody. Overuse of your reverb seems to have caused most of it but never-the-less, it is good and has some awesome potential.
Grade A

Cheers,
Zac

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DarkSword - Turn On
DarkSword - Hell Bound
DarkSword - Fresh
DarkSword - Styled
DarkSword - Shadowed Sun
DarkSword - Turning Forward
DarkSword - ALLFRUIT
Pacific Mint vs DarkSword - Climax Zone 2005
SoundClick Page

---FL Studio 9 User---

Thanks for the feedback |Dark|Sword| , i will take these points into consideration.

The lead dfinately had a bit too much reverb on it but it has been sorted now.

'tis good ;D I like. Pretty much what, whatever his nick, said before. And one note in the melody sounds weird :S. Other than that, it's great, totally loved the intro too ;D

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pretty cool, most of the points of how to improve it have been covereed

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There's a tribal sample in the mix somewhere. I can barely hear it, which is unfortunate, because when I do hear it, it sounds really cool. In fact, a lot of your sounds are way to soft.

I like your acid. A lot.

A lot of hiss and muddiness in the lead melody. I'm with DarkSword. cut back on the reverb a bit.

Both your intro and outro had really great ambiences. Those parts were very well done.

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