Hey producers, this is my first post in this forum. I'm hoping to get some feedback on a track I'm working on. I've never finnished a track before, but I'm thinkin of completing this one. If you don't like it at all, please tell me. It's made in Reason 3 and the genre is uplifting trance. Link below:

DJ Audun - Untitled v2

Edit: I have been working quite a bit on this tune now, so I've updated the sample. I'm actually rather pleased with the result. Unlike the last sample which was only 20 sec long, this one lasts for 3 minutes. In the sample you can hear the song from the beginning and almost till the breakdown. Please let me know what you think and bring on some constructive critisism.

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Last edited by DJ_Audun on May-28-2005 at 23:58

Hey,
Listening .... Honestly, I was expecting something totally fucked up, but so far it does sound pretty cool man, the sample is really short, also U need to get some more midle FREQS in this one, I just hear low and highs, but barely Midle Freqs, try boosting ur pads, add a stereoenchancer also to give them more fullness.
U are going very good man .
Kopi =o.

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For a rookie producer you have made a nice sample Too bad you did not give us more to listen too because now there really is not that much to judge. But what I have heard so far is promising.

Can you showcase more of your track?

Cheers,

Nomen Nescio

Aye thanks for the replies! You're totally right about the mid-frequency's, I'm going to fix that. I'll post a longer rip or the whole tune when I get a little further in the production. Nomen: I'm working on a progressive trance tune and another trance tune also atm, but I have gotten even shorter with them. I'll definitely post samples later thought.

Not bad at all! This is gonna be a nice one! Keep up the good work!

hey this is really hott. I'm bookmarkign this thread - hope u add on to it.

I'll keep an eye & an ear out

where's your RMS ..your high frequoncies is floating-need clarity...nice track
I want more to listen

Excuse me for my ignorance, but what is RMS? Thanks for listening!

Nice and energyc.

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Thanks Sphere. I have been working quite a bit on this tune now, so I've updated the sample. I'm actually rather pleased with the result. Unlike the last sample which was only 20 sec long, this one lasts for 3 minutes. In the sample you can hear the song from the beginning and almost to the breakdown. Please let me know what you think and bring on some constructive critisism.

Konstruktiv kritikk? Du suger! Ikke helt akkurat.
Your tune lacks bass... Increase volume, but watch the compressing/clipping.

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