Hi all,
This one is Dark Techtrance. Warning to some: my creations are twisted. Any feedback appreciated...

Link: http://www.audiostreet.net/artist.aspx?artistid=19927

^go to the above page & download "Stain" mp3.

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Start---like Gigi Da'gostino..- I liked
Like real snares(I understand that they not real )
cool Harmony
For me this track is'nt dark,for me this is FUNNY track,because everything is like JOKE:
claps,sanres,hihats-everything is very primitive...Good Style,
Nice strings or gutars reverse in middle(very good cut)
KEEEP GOING! ! ! ! ! !

had pleasure....

8/10(because Idea is good),track is'nt very proffesional,but I liked

Heya, I'll give you a listen.

oh, surprise, finally the forum likes me again

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homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

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Originally posted by linkmage Start---like Gigi Da'gostino..- I liked Like real snares(I understand that they not real ) cool Harmony For me this track is'nt dark,for me this is FUNNY track,because everything is like JOKE: claps,sanres,hihats-everything is very primitive...Good Style, Nice strings or gutars reverse in middle(very good cut) KEEEP GOING! ! ! ! ! ! had pleasure.... 8/10(because Idea is good),track is'nt very proffesional,but I liked

8/10! thanks. Im glad you had fun with it.

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Originally posted by cybernetica Heya, I'll give you a listen. oh, surprise, finally the forum likes me again

Thanks mate.

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This melody you've got going is really weird. It's like a demented circus kinda thing. It's really trippy.

This sounds a lot like your usual stuff. I guess there's not too much wrong wrong with that, It'd just be cool to hear some different sounds from the ones you usually employ.

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What i disliked here and wanne fault even is the lack of structure.

I just felt there was no flow, even if you go dark or weird style try to put some story behind your tune.

cant say i liked the melody was to random for me.

Not my taste hehe.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

This is very strange stuff. I kinda feel scared and dirty after listening to it... lol.

It is what it is... certainly experimental cos I've never heard anything like it before, except maybe your last track. It is completely self absorbed and dissapears up its own arse a few times before re-emerging even more wierd.

This is so far from conventional trance, its like Surrealist Psy or something...

Is there some subtle changes in bpm there? It kinda sounds like its speeding up and slowing down. Interesting effect. Some very complicated melodies in there too.

Wierd shit man, really original...

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I don't like this...
It doesn't sound dark too me.
It's so random

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex This melody you've got going is really weird. It's like a demented circus kinda thing. It's really trippy. This sounds a lot like your usual stuff. I guess there's not too much wrong wrong with that, It'd just be cool to hear some different sounds from the ones you usually employ.

Thanks for the advise Jex. Searching for new sounds might be a key improvement factor. cheers.

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Originally posted by Massive84 What i disliked here and wanne fault even is the lack of structure. I just felt there was no flow, even if you go dark or weird style try to put some story behind your tune. cant say i liked the melody was to random for me. Not my taste hehe.

No worries mate. thanks for giving it a listen.

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Originally posted by Axolotyl This is very strange stuff. I kinda feel scared and dirty after listening to it... lol. It is what it is... certainly experimental cos I've never heard anything like it before, except maybe your last track. It is completely self absorbed and dissapears up its own arse a few times before re-emerging even more wierd. This is so far from conventional trance, its like Surrealist Psy or something... Is there some subtle changes in bpm there? It kinda sounds like its speeding up and slowing down. Interesting effect. Some very complicated melodies in there too. Wierd shit man, really original...

lol
thanks Axolotyl.

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Originally posted by The Drow I don't like this... It doesn't sound dark too me. It's so random

hehe. Thanks for giving it a go anyways.


Anyone else have some feedback?

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex This melody you've got going is really weird. It's like a demented circus kinda thing. It's really trippy.

couldn't have put it better my self....


this is EXTREMELY trippy, I think i'm getting dizzy.

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as someone posted this is not dark in any way(at least for my taste)but definitively was a very fun to listen track,i enjoyed all the melodys and the kidish melodic lines

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hey whats up
i like the intro synth you use
i dont really like that synth that comes on at 18 seconds not my style i guess
this is a bit funky for my tastes i think
i think throughout the first 2 minutes, the song sounds a bit empty, maybe lack of percs, it hink the bassline may need soem beefing up too
i like the mood change after the breakdown, but synths arent that of my taste, but its your music =)
near the end, around 530, it sounds a bit too crowded and jumbled a bit i think.
production isnt bad, but id say use more percs, stronger bassline, and some more pads =)