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took me 6 days and i used fruityloops with Absynth 2.

i dont wanna post this in the promotion forum because its not that good. Heck, it sounds good to me couse i made it, but i know it sounds like crap to you all. what you all think?

To get your answer.
Compare this to a pro. track and see what similarities you find.
All I can say is that the melody is nice.

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well are the strings nice atleast?

there are alot of clipping issues. it needs to mixed, mastered, and the drums need to be WAY fattened up. The percussion needs alot more to it. The main arpish melody is way to loud and is clipping. the melody is alright, but it just doesnt grab me. i think the percussion is just the standard fruity dance samples. work on at least changing the sound of them a bit. its good for an amatuer effort. just keep it up and you'll find you way

but uhh..what was with the pitch fuck at the end lol


ps. dont be put down so much with what we or anyone say, and dont be so negative about your tracks. its all about fun, its not a pissing contest. the only judging that will be done is of your track, not you. you should never appologize for your work. you just need more practice, dont let this bring you down/stop working.

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Avoiding talk about the melody (everyone has one taste), there's a lot of clipping (distortion), you need to adjust the tracks volumes (i can't hear the drum together with the arp)... Mix and Master, learn more about it because we all need to know more than just compose the notes and sounds from your synth.

Anyway... You are creating something, and most people don't... keep on!

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You definitely need to mix this better. Sometimes the kick is too loud, sometimes I can't hear it at all. Look up some mixing info on Google. It's all over the place.

You also need more elements, such as a bassline and more percussion.

Technical aspects aside, it's pretty good, actually. I'm going to go against the herd a bit, and say that I actually kind of like the melody. It's a bit cheesy and unoriginal sounding, but that doesn't preclude it sounding good. Good first try, bro.

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i like it beside's it distorting like a mother ****** and the volume levels on some sounds

I am not going to repeat what was say higher, just check the plugin "inspector" its free. Drop a least one instance in the master channel on the last FX entry and then you have to keep the clippin LEDs off during all your song..
Find tutorials about compression!
And don't give up

The important thing here is, you have the comprehension of trance/dance and how its made up and flows, how melodys run together.. most people in the world struggle with this aspect, so they never really get off the ground as producers..

Everyone here basically has that ability naturally, so we spend our time here learning how to make these melodys and compositions sound more professional..

Some great advice for you in the above posts, looking into mixing, FX, Eq'ing and finally mastering.. perhaps even take a sound engineering short course?

I would love to see you remix and do it again after spending a year here working on your production and picking up tips..

Its also very cool you are enjoying what you are making, one of my favourite things about producing is when you figure somthing out or learn somthing new that works and your whole production just steps up a notch..

so, have fun and keep climbing

thanks for all the feedback!

cheers!