oyea.. so its here..
can anyone maybe help me out with some suggestions.. cant really think think of something to continue cos im kinda drunk.. oyea its bad at my age but im almost 17 so shite :P

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reply moi vite s'îl vous plaît I think..

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Last edited by Takkra on May-30-2005 at 13:43

Took a good look at your sig, hehe

Good haunted atmosphere, I like the synth thingy that comes in at one minute and a half {Numbers on my keyboard aren't working} Also the sci-fi sounds in the background are cool. Maybe it needs more wickedness or something. Only thing to do is to enforce the evilness of the song, by using very abrupt sounds or SFX.
Dark Trance sure is a thingy going on at TA, ay? Well, I like it, let me know if it's updated

-weBs

ok.. im working on the track now @ this very moment.
completely pure and sane .
Ill have a closer look to some fx.. I just made the ones you hear by luck so.. hrrr...
Thanks for your reply weBs
Anyone else?

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Hey man,
Listening ... Hehehe, very Computer sound FX intro :P, I like the Muted synth u use in the very begin, maybe it has too much reverb on it though, but I like it, it has a funky feeling. I like the semitone u use in the Fat sound, is very sweet.
In overall, not my genre, so I cannot give u a real opinion, just lacks of Drums, because they are a bit simple for the moment, kick/Snare/Hats, etc, I would try adding soem congas and shakers, or a loop.
I like it, keep the good work man .
Kopi =o.

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the intro is nice,i specially liked the bass line at the begining,the mastering sound very nice so far too,i really dont many complaints whit the drums,maybe just as kopi sugested some shakres or lite things here and there but is just a matter of taste,i liked.if you want to make me a review here is the link to my post


http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=266753

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i think this is the basis of a great tune, and this is the sorta trance i play/spin.

i have to say that making the sounds a lot more "dirtier" qwould imporive it, like rougher, raspier synths.

also a harder kick maybe (although this is more a personal prefrence )

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I dont know what to say, I think you made this track in 5 hours....
maybe more percs or loop? MASTERING (need tracks bouncings,because your bass is overflowed other elements

NICE WORK DUDEY ,not my style,but....cool

actually I made all loops in 2 hours and put it toghether in 45 or so minutes ..
but ive gotta make it moooore dark and evil and twisted so im sending in some padzz and PERCS yes im working on them..
guys thanks for all your replies! ill have a look into the bass too.. and the tb303.. so much .. but,
Im definitly nót going to change the melody and the atmosphere..
mastering isnt actually something im really good at so..
i think I did pretty well with my 4 weeks fruity/vanguard/ACID experience .

If anyone else has some critism or suggestions.. i'd gladly accept them !

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UPDATE

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(4:48 is just a joke )

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Last edited by Takkra on May-22-2005 at 20:23

Well I checked the old and the new update, let me say you did major changes in this new update, cleaner sounds and such, but I still think the bass is overshadowing the rest of the track elements.

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Originally posted by PDM Well I checked the old and the new update, let me say you did major changes in this new update, cleaner sounds and such, but I still think the bass is overshadowing the rest of the track elements.

I dont really know what you mean by

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the bass is overshadowing the rest of the track elements.

Is it too powerful/hard/messy when you compare it to the other elements?? should I turn the bass down or the rest up?
somebody help me..

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cool, dark and techy

more high end percs, some compression and EQ (your pads are spilling all over the mix, centralize them maybe), especially on the kickdrum

the bass needs to be less loud, this is especially noticeable around 1:20. cool acidy lead.

you definitely keep the elements coming, and you keep them fresh.

more percussions, duck the bass under the kickdrum, and lower it a little; compress, compress, compress, and a little eq, and you'll have a solid track.

thumbs up