hello, i just finished this track, been working my ass off finishing this.. and already made 2 former versions i considered complete..

this is the third and final version.. I hope atleast..


Subtara - Subliminal (Original Mix)


if some got any comment would be appreciated

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Last edited by Subtle on Sep-28-2005 at 08:24

now i remember where i heard it...your dj mix.

(listened to sample)

- i like the simple, almost minimalist approach to the hats/percs, yet there is still much to hear in the background
- do some more crazy breaks perc work in the break beat part. sorta like lost tribe - angel, maybe.
- you should a longer, more progressive transition into the second main melody
- sound/production wise, there is nothing in the track to make it stand out sonically, like some interesting fx trick, or sample, etc.
- you should have more tension transitions, such as quick changes from no (or filtered) percs/hats...
- what i really like bout this track is the interesting drive created by the melody itself, sounds almost epic but not quite. definatly a nice track to use in certain parts of a set.

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Right m8, taking a listen now.

Havent heard your other versions since Im new here.

You've got nice percussion work in the intro. Considering how little that happens at the intro its really nice to hear the few additions that keeps it interesting to listen to.

It gets a tad repetetive nearing the half of the track, but then you counter that by introducing a synth, so nice work there.
There seems to be some background voice sample at that point? Its quite hard to distinguish.

It's a tad repetetive track. But you keep introducing small touches from time to time so it works out well in the end.

Maybe you should keep this mix and do a new shorter mix of it?

Anyway, its a solid trance track.
Nice work!

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Originally posted by eulerfx now i remember where i heard it...your dj mix. (listened to sample) - i like the simple, almost minimalist approach to the hats/percs, yet there is still much to hear in the background - do some more crazy breaks perc work in the break beat part. sorta like lost tribe - angel, maybe. - you should a longer, more progressive transition into the second main melody - sound/production wise, there is nothing in the track to make it stand out sonically, like some interesting fx trick, or sample, etc. - you should have more tension transitions, such as quick changes from no (or filtered) percs/hats... - what i really like bout this track is the interesting drive created by the melody itself, sounds almost epic but not quite. definatly a nice track to use in certain parts of a set.

wow, somebody actually downloaded my mix

that was some good tips.. especially that filter thing, its gonna keep me busy for a while, but its prolly worth it.. and ill take a look at quick changes of no (or filtered) percs/hats.. thanks

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Originally posted by Drik Right m8, taking a listen now. Havent heard your other versions since Im new here. You've got nice percussion work in the intro. Considering how little that happens at the intro its really nice to hear the few additions that keeps it interesting to listen to. It gets a tad repetetive nearing the half of the track, but then you counter that by introducing a synth, so nice work there. There seems to be some background voice sample at that point? Its quite hard to distinguish. It's a tad repetetive track. But you keep introducing small touches from time to time so it works out well in the end. Maybe you should keep this mix and do a new shorter mix of it? Anyway, its a solid trance track. Nice work!

thanks.. i might make a shorter mix

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That's it.
I had enough of this track...
Too much new versions.
Someone please sign this up.

j/k I'll review later

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Hey man, the track it's pretty cool, I liked alot the released, mastering it's really nice, I dont have bad comments about, a 9.0 in my kopimeter .
Kopi =o.

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Very nice track, I really like teh synthlines, it's got that uplifting progressive sound I'm really into at the moment. This kind of music is really fun to listen to anytime, for me anyways. Really deep stuff you have going on here, I like how its nice and long.
-Alex

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Originally posted by Subtle

Hey Subtle

This track has a full sound ...& supurb production!

The pads could be filtered a bit with phaser.

1.30 electrofying buzz
1.50 nice breakbeat. The LFO is crazy! It is hypnotizing.
2.36 excellent percussion, great contrast to the rhythm.

...Just scanned over the other posts & I aggree what Drik says about the track being a tad repetitive. I also agree with eulerfx that the track could do with an interesting lead. Maybe if you put in a interesting lead then that will make it less repetitive.

Great work mate

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Great percussions and sound quality like allways

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This deserves a bump, too

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