-not much for the kick
-intro is pretty simple and bland
-like the synth but it's too quiet, vocals are drowning it out
-speaking of the vocals; they seem fine. maybe could do with more volume . An why not try putting them through a vocoder?
-Half-way through now and all I can hear is the vocals, strings, perc an an extremely low synth. Needs more.
-Having said that, I like the climax. Piano work is good.
-melody dosent take the tune up like it's supposed to. No drive.

It's a good tune but it's nothing special dude. Try bringing in some variation on the synths, more bass and sort out the percussion. Vocals are nice.

7/10

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

actually had to do lots of tweaking with the voices. The fact I made their bpm higher resulted in some kind of distortion which I filtered down a bit. So I couldn't adjust much unless I wanted the voice to sound awful again. Thanks for the critics though! Any more?