Hey, this is a track that im currently workin on...just thought id let u guys hear what i got so far with it... and for those of you that have heard my other stuff know that this is far from done

*EDIT*
Here it is

there now it should work

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"...I searched on the mountains and in the valleys but neither in the heights nor in the depths was I able to find Him. I went to the Caaba in Mecca, but He was not there either.
I questioned the scholars and philosophers but He was beyond thair understanding.
I then looked into my heart and it was there where He dwelled that i saw him;he was no where else to be found."

--Jelaluddin Rumi

Last edited by cistane on Jun-19-2005 at 18:27

i can't open your sample..

oh man...no wonder i havent been getting any comments on it...thanks man

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"...I searched on the mountains and in the valleys but neither in the heights nor in the depths was I able to find Him. I went to the Caaba in Mecca, but He was not there either.
I questioned the scholars and philosophers but He was beyond thair understanding.
I then looked into my heart and it was there where He dwelled that i saw him;he was no where else to be found."

--Jelaluddin Rumi

np!

pretty lame that no1 else told ya..


i still can't open it?

I cannot open it, brother. Why don't you post your www.soundclick.com/xxx <-----your soundclick band name here and we can check out the track? I'll be waiting. =o)

my predictions.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/wri...maticreflection

there is his soundclick, and the song he wants us to review:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=2531315

Review (for D.S.F):
Firstly, its very loud, but i guess thats just the way you have exported it.
Bass is fat, i like it.
First breakdown is a bit repetetive.
Kick is too loud/dominant.
Second breakdown:
Pads are nice, kind of sounds like a dolphin a bit.
Good sounds.
Stretching on a bit, still no kick :/
The snare is stretched way too much, the clubbers would want their kick back!
The song has a nice structure, the climax is good aswell but the outro cuts off early i think, probably not ur fault, something to do with soundclick max mp3 size probably.

Conclusion:
kick is too loud, breakdowns are too long.
Other than that a nice track.

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http://www.myspace.com/markr4

Last edited by mark_the_gooner on Jun-19-2005 at 13:28

the outro does cut off like that...but only cause its a new track im currently working on ...thanks for the comments
and yeah ur right...the second breakdown is tremendously long...im definitely not keeping it like that

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"...I searched on the mountains and in the valleys but neither in the heights nor in the depths was I able to find Him. I went to the Caaba in Mecca, but He was not there either.
I questioned the scholars and philosophers but He was beyond thair understanding.
I then looked into my heart and it was there where He dwelled that i saw him;he was no where else to be found."

--Jelaluddin Rumi

Last edited by cistane on Jun-19-2005 at 18:30

I heard it...this is a very pleasant song. I agree with the thngs he said. Other than that, very relaxing song. I loved it.