Here's a track I've been working on!

Composed by me, lyrics and singing by Vicky.
I'd appreciate any comment on this track!

Here's the link:
http://www.born.se/music/BrainChild-Beginning.mp3

Last edited by Drik on Jun-23-2005 at 21:56

Sounds really great mate, like everything except that kick . You need to change that Fruityloops sounding kick.

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I have to agree about the kick, could be changed to give it the little extra.
Your synts sounds great, a few of them are perhaps a tad bright, but that might be only me

Good Work, Keep it up

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Yeah you guys are right.. it still needs some work..

I'm going to change the bassdrum for the track and do some work with the vocal mixing.

The first intro vocals are meant as an effect build up and get released spot on later, so I'm going to remove some echo volume and do more "radio" fx on the voice in the beginning. Also heighten the volume of her during the more drum heavy part to get her more upfront.

Also remove the hipitched synth arpeg. It a little too upfront when combined with the vocals.

You guys spot anything else?
I'm going to do the last changes today, so I'd appreciate if you guys could give it a last listen. And be really critic about it

very nice. I like the slightly dark goa/acidy type feel in the intro. I agree theres something about the kick. Nice vocals could be a touch louder in places, melody not bad either.

Has an indivudual style which is nice, as I stands out.


the little synth riff that comes in at 3min 35 not sure if it a bit weak sounding.

V good though

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Vicky's voice is wonderful! The song is great, but need some more time in the studio... As told, the kick sound very much like the fruityloops original kick. The strings should need more work, and that lead sounds to simple, but that's your decission.
Great track, and best wishes! Good luck.

//Alexander
Edit:
Jag skickade just iväg ett pm till dig

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