oh i love the sub-bass!

the lead is awesome, really think its seperated well from the other sounds

the kick seems to have too much attack and too short of a release on it.

the second lead at 4:50, is clashing on my monitors, i think with the percs? anyone else hear this? i do like it if it was cleaner

i can't say the track really goes anywhere after that, but i did really like the first few minutes

Thanks Anthony. I appreciate it.

I will have to clean up the mix a bit...see if I hear anything clashing. I don't think I did but I will check again.

Thanks for your thoughts again. They are appreciated

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Good god... supersaw'o'rama at the start. Nice sounding ambience though.

Percs are neat. That highhat combo has a nice metallic clink to it. I'm feeling the kick gets lost a bit later on in the track though. Could be just my headphones though.

The lead isnt terribly special imho. Engineered well, but its not rocking my socks with originality or anything. Vocals are well done.. not overused at all and add a lot to the track.

The second lead sounds like its competing for frequency bandwidth with the first lead. You need to eq this better.

Overall, very nice tune but can do with some more improvements...

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Originally posted by Axolotyl Good god... supersaw'o'rama at the start. Nice sounding ambience though. Percs are neat. That highhat combo has a nice metallic clink to it. I'm feeling the kick gets lost a bit later on in the track though. Could be just my headphones though. The lead isnt terribly special imho. Engineered well, but its not rocking my socks with originality or anything. Vocals are well done.. not overused at all and add a lot to the track. The second lead sounds like its competing for frequency bandwidth with the first lead. You need to eq this better. Overall, very nice tune but can do with some more improvements...

See that is why I am here!!

I actually produced this track over 2 years ago..one of the last things I did while my studio was still in Hollywood. I am finally getting my studio back up in the back room behind my garage in my new house and I wanted to pick some brains on my last stuff before I get going again. Thank you for the thoughts...they will come in handy

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this sounds good to me.. I like it...good sound quality.. good mastered.. this is good mate ! very good.

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Originally posted by RobertB this sounds good to me.. I like it...good sound quality.. good mastered.. this is good mate ! very good.

Thank you Robert for the kind words. I appreciate it. Very much

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