First thing that hits me is the vocals. Need work. Fx or vocoding. The synths around em are nice and clear. Guitar dosent really carry the melody like it should, agen, try some reverb or delay. And get a piano in the background to add atmosphere.
Uhm... the rest is good but I think this needs abit more work dude.
It's hard to judge this one given that it's a raw mix. and on this your peak-to-average level ratios are a bit stretched.
Stick a miximiser on it, and line up a 16-bar section alongside a 16-bar section of the original. Play the two loops together and ask yourself - "Is mine up to the same standard?". Answer your own question and keep on working at it.
Jun-27-2005 10:46
vrahnos
In the mix
Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Heraklion, Crete
i like the music, its great.
the vocals dont fit well in the beggining, if i was you i'd remove the vocals before the breakdown
after the breakdown the vocals are ok, like the wippenberg rmx....
i like the guitar too....but that s2h (g&d remix) effect on the vocals is the worst part
Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,
needs some work, but i like the ideas
fix that guitar sound and eq the whole lot. i do like the g&d effect on the vocals the kick seems somewhat loud too, it distorts when i raise the volume of my stereo just a little bit.
The tempo of the music is faster than the vocals.. So lower the bpm and you should be fine. I like the proggy feel to this. Nice ideas, but as others said - needs more work. In form of EQ, volume-leveling, Reverb and so on..
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Jun-28-2005 17:51
NEWYORKTRANCER
Suspended User
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Bronx
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....Its ok man
Jun-28-2005 20:13
Mycron
Aneym.com Staff
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Budapest
nice remix renco
the main synth is very nice, i suggest you to add a couple of more elements to the track, what i really miss is a prominent string from the background, to make a catchy atmoshpere with it,
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