Hey again,

Got a little something i've been working on, the first two minutes of my new track. Would appreciate some opinions on how its going so far and theres an odd little bit i've placed in last 30 seconds of the sample, any feedback on whether that works or not would be great also.

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Krimes - Further Movement (sample)

Hey,
Listening ... I noticed at parts, the kick is a bit out of synch, I dont know if you wanted to do a contratempo at porpuse there but sounds kinda weird for me, above all because you do it with the strong time.
The track itself is very mynimalist as the rest of your tracks, pretty experimental.
In overall, you are improving your sound, I noticed you added some efects to the drums and that's good, this stuff I think is good for when you are geting into production seriously, experimenting with all the elements, etc, but stills sounding more experimental than like a real track imo .
I think you are going great, I remember my first tracks and for sure yours are way better, my sugesstion is to try more styles, experiment with more melodies and harmonys, try o be more musical.
Keep the good work up .
Kopi =o.

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