well, to get some drive just add a 4x4 hat in there

- that breakdown sounds pretty nice with all those layers of melodies, fx. sounds almost electroish
- i'd remove some of those lowere frequencies on the main synths and add a simple, but deep bassline and set the attack high on the synth. then make the higher frequencies of the kick stand out.
- eq the tracks so they don't all clash at the lower-mid level.
- add some funky/electroish percs to fill higher frequencies more
- overall, this is definatly a nice start.

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Thank you very much, this is exactly the kind of help I need, not just "this sucks" or "pretty good", so this is much aprecciated. I'll look into it tomorrow..right now it's 05:10am and I am messeeed uuuup.
Thanks again for listening and replying