...like there's not enough of them already.

Sample - rename to mp3

Well, anyways. This is my first finished track, so it's interesting to hear your opinion on it.
Any ideas on what's change or add are greatly appreciated. I'm a bit running out of ideas after the 6 days work... right up to the point when this track doesn't invoke any emotions in me anymore

Btw. Are mp4s ok here? Since I could have given the full version, but it's a 20mb mp3... kinda hard to upload that while on dialup.

Well I found some of them to be quite usable - those singing bits or the whisper - but what goes for the rest, ex. chorus... er, kinda not very persuasive sounding, so to say. But that's not my fault

Any ideas on the track itself? C'mon, people, you can't bash it more than I already have done in my mind (in fact I pretty much hate it by now ).

Btw, here's the full version in mp4. Your Winamp may happen to not like it actually, though...

http://kreata.fatal.ru/mfx/Yana_Kay...Hika_remix).4pm (rename to mp4)

Here's the latest full version, in mp3. Mainly reworked some things and the structure.

http://kreata.fatal.ru/mfx/Yana_Kay...Hika_Remix).3pm (rename to mp3)

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Yana Kay - Eyes of a Perfect Stranger (Hika remix)