Thanks to the comments and advice of a few guys here it inspired me to keep trying at it, and I think the song is pretty different from the last render.
Fixed the kick, compressor was screwing it up (it was dulling the clickness)
Revamped perc
In the process of editing the melody after the break (which is still M-T!)
Tweaked settings in instruments and effects, and some other random stuff..
It still may be massive cheese and work in progress, but please tell me what's /should be edited.. thanks alot, again!
Hi ... nice hat...like from humor film... ..I think you can take some reeverb for your bass...or delay(a little ) to your hats...because now your track is like from studio,but trance must be like for example... I listen music in water.......and I think your trance gate is overfowing melody...nice kick... from 3 minute everythig is great,but your melody is to small...percs also very nice...good job.... take a look for my track.... http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...6645&forumid=74
Jul-05-2005 18:43
kopi_luwak
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Hey,
Listening, nice use of Fx and Drums , I would se a deepest pad, but that's just my opinion .
In overall, I would a bit more effects over some synths, the melodies are nice, good work .
Kopi =o.
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Jul-06-2005 15:39
Digital Aura
Project5 Guru
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
Wow! Nice rework bro! This IS INDEED much improved! Nice kick! Great percs! AWESOME MELODY!
Yup... can't fault this. Love it!
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/should be edited.. thanks alot, again!
..I think you can take some reeverb for your bass...or delay(a little ) to your hats...because now your track is like from studio,but trance must be like for example... I listen music in water.......and I think your trance gate is overfowing melody...nice kick... from 3 minute everythig is great,but your melody is to small...percs also very nice...good job.... take a look for my track....
, I would se a deepest pad, but that's just my opinion 
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