Hi TAs,

This is my new track! Uplifting & melodic trance.. im quite satisfied of the melody... but im not sure if i need more FX or etc... so if u dont mind to please leave me a feedback/comment...

Old Sample

UPDATED!!!

There are two sample here.. the Old & updated one..

PS: if u had listen to the old version.. please proceed to the UPDATED one...

Thnx!!!

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Last edited by DJ Dinz on Jun-25-2005 at 19:44

I really liked the intro, but would have liked a techier lead myself... it's a bit too 'standard trance' - not a fan of the chord sequence. Also, you had more perc before the breakdown than after it, so the main section seemed to lack a bit of energy.

Well produced though.

7/10

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = I'd play it)

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This is great.
I like the offbeat snare.
You should make it a bit louder.
The stab is great.
Nice pads.
The rev crash should be wetter.
Nice sweep fx.
The main melody is a bit boring but it's ok.
You should add more precs and also more fxes.
I really think that a choir (long with no chords and lots of delay) will help the track to sound more interesting.
Add it on the main theme.
Some tiny acids can be pushed in to keep the track interesting.

Overall I really like this.
4/5

Omer

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good bass as well.. powerful drive.. fucking tranzy damn nice lead there.. loses some power when the beats kicks in.. old school track.. but needs more power in the percussions

7,5/10

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thanks alot for the nice feedback guys... very intereestin feedback.. lots of input

i'll be updatin now.. cheers!

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Sounds pretty good so far. The main synth sounds nice, as does the bass, but theres jsut too much tension in that bass note. It just seems like it wants to resolve to a different note, but that may just be me. Was kinda disappointed with the progression once the strings hit. The lead is simple but it works. The percussion is good, but you need more of that low end chunky stuff once it kicks in.

All in all a very good start. I'd like to hear the final version.

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sounds good man cool driving stuff... the mainlead is alittle too loud i think. melodies are nice anyway i like this man

cheers
Renco

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UPDATED

feedback n comment plsss :P :P :P

thnx

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I will listen to it tommorow after the history finals
Please wish me luck

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Really nice tune!
Love the bassline.

It's hard to tell how the song is going to be, but it's a great sample u got

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I dont like the melody and the percussion needs work. Production is nice though but very standard, it misses that something extra.

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Thanks again for the feeback... hehe

quote:

I dont like the melody and the percussion needs work. Production is nice though but very standard, it misses that something extra.

Stino: I think i wont change the melody ...but i will concentrate more the percussion part.. Thnx

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i think this tune was amazingly good produced and very cool, the baseline and kick is just totaly great and all the percs too, i didnt like the strings in the breakdown, but the melody on the lead are great! could be a diferent sound on the lead tho, that standard saw types kinda out now, should have been some kind of bells or something instead. like your first lead. that also needs some work to be more crsip. listen to Gabriel and Dresden - Around You and u know the sound i mean.

dj_palm: Agree with you.. n i'll try to listen to G&B - Around u.. thnxx

moolow: Thanks!

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I will listen to it tommorow after the history finals

The_Drow: Gud Luck m8! hahaha

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