Intro was a bit weird.

Breakdown is really nice. I love the piano thing. What comes after was very unexpected. Somekind of second intro after the breakdown? It's original, but I can't say I like it too much. Though that's just a matter of taste.

Overall production is good.

Hmm.. maybe I should have it continue after the buildup instead of going to the alternate melody. Will check it out..

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Right, been rewriting the track. Pretty much everything has been changed and new parts have been ímplemented and old stuff has been removed.

So, let me know if this one is better

http://www.emortal.se/music/emortal...dreamer_mix.mp3

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Just heard the original, sounds like a very chilled kind of track. Intro is indeed a bit weird, wouldn't really fit it in the track in my opinion.

Really like the piano, would fit nice in some sort of epic trancer I think! Not much a fan of those squary synths, don't sound too interesting to me.

Overall, I think there are some very nice ideas in the track, just needs a much better structure to make them all shine through. I'd definately go for the piano and create something nice around it.

I'll grab the dreamer mix now

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Cool.

Yeah, I wasnt that satisfied with the first version. Still have some work to do on the dreamer mix with the synthline, needs a tad more variation.. (more filtering, and slower in the first part in the track).

Plus, I've left some empty places where I'll throw in vox later.

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Jan Johnston - Let the world fall apart (E:mortal remix) - Metallic Recordings
Headstrong ft. Tiff Lacey - The Truth (E:mortal remix) - SOLA
E:mortal - Lost Planet - Ministry of Sound & BTR, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Tell me - SOLA
E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Footprints - SOLA, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Coming Home - SOLA
E:mortal ft. Vicky Fee - Say What You Feel - SOLA, E:mortal - Days On End - BTR
Headstrong ft. Kirsty Hawkshaw - In in Your Eyes (E:mortal remix)- SOLA