What do you think? its my latest that i working on now!



substorm - first sunset (prev sample)

These should be in the promotion forum. Anyways, I can't comment now cause I'm making a tape.

Melody sounds very familar

Really nice melo and lead mate! Really gives me the feeling of a sunset, so you might say the contents of the track fits nicely with the title

I think you need to do something about the bass and kick, they're too un-recognizable. The kick is too "boring" too. Try to add a ride on it.

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Originally posted by Project 7 Melody sounds very familar

Yepp... does´n it..
and yor right... thats where i got the idéa..

i'd agree with that,

sikk lead and nice riff, but as flamingopikken sed u cant hear much else and its a lil bit boring. got anutha sample for us?

peace out broe

Last edited by DJ_RoKo on Jul-08-2005 at 12:39

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Originally posted by flamingopikken Really nice melo and lead mate! Really gives me the feeling of a sunset, so you might say the contents of the track fits nicely with the title I think you need to do something about the bass and kick, they're too un-recognizable. The kick is too "boring" too. Try to add a ride on it.

Thank for the feed back! and i agree on the bass and kick... and the onther drums are coming

This is not the promotion forum.

Anyways, the melody is cliché! I could've sworn I've heard it a million times before.
The melody also seems quite random. There is no idea or meaning. It's just many random arpeggiated notes.
I suggest you redo the melody. It needs a better theme and MORE VARIATION! 2:18 minute with EXACTLY the same pattern is more than boring. It makes you wanna slap the artist silly.

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Originally posted by Corteoz This is not the promotion forum. Anyways, the melody is cliché! I could've sworn I've heard it a million times before. The melody also seems quite random. There is no idea or meaning. It's just many random arpeggiated notes. I suggest you redo the melody. It needs a better theme and MORE VARIATION! 2:18 minute with EXACTLY the same pattern is more than boring. It makes you wanna slap the artist silly.

I understand that u think that... but as i said before.. that this is only a sample... its just a 3 track sample... ive just start working on it... but anyway thank for the feedback.. all critisism is good

lead is really good but pay attention to drums and bassline!!

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Please put this in the music production forum, people aren't exactly looking for these sort of things here...

// Wim

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Originally posted by Icone Please put this in the music production forum, people aren't exactly looking for these sort of things here... // Wim

I know.. my mistake... sorry if it inconvinience for you! peace