- whoa, seems a bit too hectic and muddy. that 4x4 hat is too prominent in the mix.
- bass is to quiet
- all of the melodies seem to be blured and muted

overall, you should look at the producers forum and check out some mastering tutorials, etc. try to compare your track to your favourite tracks by others and see what you need to work on.

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Originally posted by eulerfx - whoa, seems a bit too hectic and muddy. that 4x4 hat is too prominent in the mix. - bass is to quiet - all of the melodies seem to be blured and muted overall, you should look at the producers forum and check out some mastering tutorials, etc. try to compare your track to your favourite tracks by others and see what you need to work on.

well besides all the muddy and mute stuff.

if we are focused in the tune itself the sound the style is it ok???