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Hey guys Here's a new track Ive been working on for a whole rainy day .. I started early and ended around 1:00 I had to do it quietly because my parents were going nuts hearing the melody over and over again So, the mastering will not be done so perfectly maybe its a bit quiet so just turn up the speakers !!

Made with: Fruity & ACID

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Any feedback will be very much appreciated

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Last edited by Takkra on Jul-19-2005 at 17:10

Hwy tak...nice too see ya here again...

percs---my style fantastic ,nice synth loop from 0:27,nice bongo ghosts nice lead.... ,but at the end(of lead every time),melody is going not to the needed side of piano roll

1. very atmospheric track
2. my foot is similar to kick
3. I think if some changes,couyld be nice narcotic club track

4. 9,5/10,need little work...

GREAT

comment my new track

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=279436

I listened that 10 times ......

U are improvinr urself a lot man! This sounds way better than the rest of ur work .
Keep it up man :
Kopi =o.

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- seems a bit empty and lacking energy in the beginning. imo your synths are kind of thin
- i like the groovy melody that comes in, but i think it could be put to better use with more tension creating sfx and improved song structure
- also, it would be nice to hear some other elements added on top just to develop atmosphere
- everything seems like a prelude to something. you should try adding a part where all the elements come together. start by adding a prominent 4x4 hat an snare.

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Thanks everyone for your reviews
Ive taken every bit of advice in the "final?" version
so, there have been small changes in total, but it's not a totally new track.

check it out:


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So what do you guys think?

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jes... hello

At first in my eyes lighted,that your vocal and your vanguard gated arp freqs is bad...because need medium freqs.........kick could be more powerful(tip-dublicate the kick,and do only high freqs)..melody is smashing up...that is awesome ... idea 10/10
mastering hmmm... maybe 7,5/10

tune has awesome potentiality....nice work...please write me to MSN messenger if you can([email protected])...nice work...

keep that

The entire song sounds like one long intro to me. Melody is very odd. Vocals are annoying. Interesting idea but just not my cup.

I like your track very much, I enjoy the minimal callousness and steady flow, this will make an excellent mixing track, in my opinion.
-Alex

Nice tunage!

This is like techno though...?! Not really what I'd call dark prog. But anyway, its got a pretty nasty feel to it. Loving the echoing on the hihats and the lead is way cool although I'm not really a fan of those cold techno melodies.

FX at 2.15 is off a bit. Doesnt sit too well in the mix.

Mastering is quite solid but it feels a little flat in the highs. But maybe its that dirty techno feeling your going for Good stereo spacing though. That lead is sitting well above the rest of the track.

Good, growly techno shit =)

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