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heh, genre could just be new age i guess
- add some snare rolls for transition. those could do this track a lot of good as far as beat variation.
- if you could rework some of the percussion, this could potentially turn into a great breaks track
- that part around 2:30 sounds really nice, but the transition into it was just a little sudden. try building tension some more
- that part around 4:11 is really nice. its a very welcome change from the previous intense section
- like mentioned, some of the melodic elements, especially the strings, are just too predictable, albeit sounding good
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