I really like the changes in this melody. Sounds very catchy, the kick is very subtle and sounds nice and wet. You think you can tell me where to get a kick like that.

Excellent melody, variate with the bass a little more instead of the average four step line, and very nice mixing too, sounds clean.
I like the arpegiated note. Good Stuff, I'm looking forward to a finished product.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

I really like the changes in this melody. Sounds very catchy, the kick is very subtle and sounds nice and wet

thanx

i was focussing more on the feedback of the melody such as notes working together etc. but i guess nothing sounded wrong.

lol, yeah sorry guys but the kick is just 2 samples ripped from a couple of tracks slightly tweaked and layerd over each other. not all that origianl but sounds good yeah.

cheers for fedback again,
more feedback is welcome.