Downloading this took forever, hmmm, let's see. I definetly like the beginning. The intro paves way for what might either be a massive, epic trance, or a really bad action movie song.
Oh okay, it breaks into a melody

1:12, that's it? Where's the energy that was promised to me?
1:20 Nice flute or string!
1:50 great synths nice melody, but still no sign of a climax...

Maybe now, hmmm nope 2:24
Okay here we go, 2:34 another break? The kick roll sounded like the climax! Argh! Too much anticipation.
Another build up heh... Maybe this one is the climax Ive been waiting for...Well, mastering is good. 3:30, it's a good premise, but I've learned that this song, in a way lacks energy. I maybe a high hat, or stronger clap might do it.
Mixing i great. Amazing use of synths though.
Needs more energy, main tune isn't fit for the intro and atmosphere it creates in the beginning. Good melody, excellent windwoods.
Eh, I woulda loved aan explosive climax as falsely advertised at the beginning of the song. Woulda made an awesome Club Track..

Keep up the good work though. I liked the Idea.

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY