Ok people heres a sample of my newest track. I wish to get some opinions on it so far. Please tell me if its any good.

Thx W.M.A

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Last edited by DJ BassBomber on Jul-24-2005 at 15:48

I really need some opinoins please guys.

Anybody?

Well It's a bit short - but I guess you knew that.

The start is good - the bassline is kind of retro, but in a good way. The breakdown that comes in after about a minute works musically, but the sounds aren't anything special and the subsequent build up doesn't really grab me. When everything comes back in the mix is a bit messy - the bottom end sort of mushes together a bit and the rhytm loses its punch.

I think it's a good tune with strong arrangement and melody - but needs refining: stronger sounds for the pads and lead, add some spacious reverb or make better use of the stereo field, eq to seperate the bassline and kick drum and low-end of the other sounds, etc.

Lots of potential but sounds like a "work in progress" at the moment.

Cheers yeah I need to get some synths from somewhere for my reason 3.0 I only have basic shit and a serious lack of funds to purchase new ones so theres a problem finding free ones. And yeah its a work in progress havent had time to get playing around with sounds and eq.

But I appreciate your comments and time thx buddy I'll work on it when I have some spare time I just been busy lately.

Cheers W.M.A