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Hey there,
Listening now...I think your drums need some more volume, I can barely hear the kick. And you might consider a clap IMO.
I like the congos or whatever that come in later.
Those Leads during the break could also be louder.
Also the melody seems repetative. Maybe bring the elements into your tune little by little so to give the listener some buildup to your main tune. It sounds like your main tune is at the very beginning.
You seem to have the timing down with arrangement, I think the main thing IMO is to have more buildup to your tune.
Just my 2 cents.
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