Hey, I have been working on this track and I was hoping I could get some help with it. I feel that I need a better intro and I definitely need to lengthen it and put an end on it, but at this point could anyone offer some suggestions? I am using FL Studio if you cant tell by the sound of it, so if you have suggestions, make sure I can accomplish them in this program.

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Thanks

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i cant really give you tips, because i am new to producing too
anyway it sounds good

but i have a question: with what vst did you create the bass, i think it's brilliant, it almost sounds sampled or something...
its very low but still has a nice timbre

anyway, just curious

Actually that is BooBass which comes with FL Studio. Though, I just realized something when I had my friend play the song on his computer. My speakers suck! It sounded great on my machine, but on his speakers, the song sounded empty, too much low, too much high, no middle. I checked with my shitty $8 earbuds too, same sound. I thought these speakers were good! They cost me $50... well not that good. Anyway, I need to fix this.

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