Well the song sounds good, I liked it. Too repeatative at the end but its still good. BTW stop asking me to reply to ur songs.

Gee thanks Iron Fist, YOU LET THE CAT OUTTA THE BAG! YOU KNOW YOU LOVED THIS SONG ! HEHE

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I know I know.

At last good kick... nice percs...

At start kick has not nice end(tick)
3:11-please listen the kick...
Very good summer atmosphere....

Try putting some original(that would be only from you)....

Now your mastering going better...But need more work

Track 9/10

My enjoy 8,5/10

Quality(mastering work) 7,5/10 before this song was maybe 5.5/10

Keep Going

BTW....cool female Voice

You do great improvement


Who wasnt at my thread,please visit it


http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=281492

Thanks alot for the review.
I think I'm going to replace that kick roll torwards the build-up's end.
It does go past the peak limit. Maybe A limiter will do.

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Thank you Dj_palm for the review. This song wa made purely will FL studio 5 and some of my own presestes for the oscilators and wasp.
I think I might have to vut a little bit off the end of my kick sample, as I overlooked the blip it creates during the drumroll after the break. Thanks again.

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Hey,
First thing I noticed, there's a clip, prolly on your Kick, try to use a parametric EQ and put down the Freqs about 5000 and 3000 a bit, that will fix it, or u can use a filte ralso .
That lead sounds a bit tiny imo, I would make it sound fatter, sounds really weak but that's just my opinion .
Vocals are cool .
In overall, mastering sounds pretty good, I just would take a look to the clip noise and I ould make those pads hugr and fatter, other than that is going really nice .
Kopi =o.

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Yeah, I already adressed the clipping, right now Im going for the bigger pads.
Thanks Kopi!

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wow dude looks like people are getting to know you. dude my me Ableton for Xmas.