New tune in the making, feedback appreciated! (sample incl.)
Lo all
I've been working on a new track this week and I really like the sound of it, There's quite a few things I'm unsure of if I should keep or not though, so I thought id give it a shot and share it here in the hopes of some feedback
Do tell if you find the vocals too cheesy
Oh, and sorry for the very bad recording quality, altho its 224kbps the limiter freaked out when i recorded it. I'll post a better one as the progress goes on
not bad but needs more energy added to it and make it more uplifting, but overall its not bad
Jul-28-2005 02:50
Kris Xperiment
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Charlotte
Nice!
Oh,this looks like it will either turn out to be a hot track! Or bad!
Good atmosphere. The one thing I don't like is the break. it's tooo quiet! lol, build some tension with pads and strings!
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Tracks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY
Jul-28-2005 04:32
linkmage
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Vilnius,Lithuania
Great arp...need jump to first plan...!!!!!!
melody must be not too loud as now.
Great percs and awesome Openhat
Resonance of of your melody is Awfull
Great Vocal
Cool track
melody 9/10
Track 8/10 (too standart for me)
Quality 9/10
Nice work..need some small changes.. and that would be Great track...
Thanks alot for the feedback guys, I really appreciate it and all info has been of most value! I'm gonna work harder on merging the intro (0:00->1:18) sequense into the main melody part (1:24->END), I made the intro afterwards, and now im more happy with that then the main melody itself :P the strings idea was very good and I think I will put some pads into the place where its get rather silent, and make a proper buildup
Thanks alot again guys
Jul-28-2005 19:55
djsphere
producer in training
Registered: Apr 2003
Location: bucharest
Overal, nice track, but the piano is too loud and hi hats sounds too bright as someone else said. The main melody is good and could make an awesome track out of this.
