Hi,

Had a quick listen, it's not bad for what it is. Sounds very sparse and your levels need sorting. Could do with some nice percussion, try and add a bit of character to your sounds, make them your own. Maybe some more layers to the bassline make it bounce a bit more. But apart from that it's a good starting point. Please take this as constructive I'm not flaming ya here

Keep up the good work and keep us posted,

Scoobz

Thanks. Yeah good idea on the layering. I'm kinda new to producing. I used to do a lot of live remixing but not creating my own tracks. How can I create a nice percussion? Just think of different beats besides the basic kick--kick clap--kick--kick clap with the cymbal on the offbeat?

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Originally posted by djlogik http://s41.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...6K2P9ISNO1EGTJQ Tell me what you guys think. I think I'm gonna add more to it so I guess I can't say it's finished. I also believe there's too much reverb, but I just want input from you people. I have yet to add effects to it or anything. Oh and the beginning is just a joke that I'm going to take out lol I just thought it was funny at the time.

You have posted in the wrong forum m8......post on the "Amateur Music Producers Promotion" forum......you will get all the feedback that you need from there.

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