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That strnage synth that starts to come in around 19 seconds caught me off guard because it was subtle and freaked me out because I thought it was coming from someone elses computer in my classroom.
I like the kick. The production quality is pretty good for being unmastered, That's a nice feeling.
Bassline is good, but... a bit average. Kinda like I've heard it before. But hell so are my basslines, if not worse.
I like the claps. And the way you do that 1/4 note delay on that reverse cymbol is neat. At the beggining.
Synth coming in now! 2:21
Hearing some background harmony. Bring it up a bit more... Unless you do later on.
Yea, hear it comes, kinda.
Break downage. Mmm. Pretty okay. I don't like that pad in the background as much as I used to. Arpeggiated synth is alright.
I guess I'm on the darker side of electornic music now. I don't like nice peaceful stuff as much as I used too. Progressive trance is kinda like "cold showers and baseball."
I want to hear some progressive trance with some distortion it. Evil prog.
Overall, in spite of my rant. This track has potential, work on polishing it up, give it some spice so it doesn't sound like everyone elses stuff. When I critisize people works please note, that my work is just as crappy (EDIT: CRAPPIER), so I speak from experience!
Keep it up, as always,
Adam
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Last edited by wrzonance on Jun-07-2005 at 05:51
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