been working on a new tune the last couple of days, pretty happy with it at the min but its still work in progress.

any feedback muchly appreciated!!

cheers.

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production wise its pretty good, but theres no drive what so ever. The bass kick is almost transparent and the entire songs leads up to...bascally the song ending.
Your song needs to have more presence.... keep it at

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Jesus Its Mick, wut u doin on ere?

OK OK... Startup is brilliant, im liking the pads and effects there, kick comes in, sounds ok to me, put some volume on tho. The percs in the back match the track. its starts to build then dies a bit, it needs more drive, its riding the waves a bit. Maybes get some effects n stuff in there too.

Nice work, very different imo.
Terry